2021年5月24日雅思写作大作文真题范文 

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雅思大作文写作题目 ：

Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them? 

范文解析 本题属于教育类话题。重点争论孩子面临教育，社交和商业压力的缘由和解决方法。该题型属于说明文类别，考生在处理文章结构时可以对应问题内容来设置主体段内容。在思索论点方面，关于社交和商业压力这两方面的缘由可能稍难一些，尤其是对于“social”这个词汇的理解。假如理解为“社会的”那么对应的缘由就比较难以概括了。 

雅思大作文文章结构 

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且写出引导下文的连接句。 

paragraph 2: 论述孩子面临教育、社交和商业压力的缘由。 

paragraph 3: 论述对应的解决方法。 

paragraph 4: 总结题目中的现象和解决方法。 

雅思大作文写作范文 

In this time and age, it is conceivable that children bear heavy pressure from education, social life and commercial respect. This tendency involves several factors and I would elaborate on them as follows. 

The most rooted one lies in the fiercer competition in the society. It is ubiquitous that the modern world is a one replete with competition. In an attempt to survive and attain success in future life, children are required to be accustomed to competing with peers in various situations, ranging from academic performance to personal skills. Besides, most parents place higher expectation on their children, urging them to study harder and diminishing their time on entertainment. Obviously, under such circumstance, excessive stress is imposed on children. 

Another factor is that children should follow certain rules to be acceptable by others. Although sometimes they do not quite approve of perspectives or values of peers, they are not allowed to behave aggressively and even conceal their true feeling to maintain a stable and close friendship. In regard to the culprit of commercial pressure, intensive advertising campaigns should be blamed for. Toys and snacks are depicted attractive and tasty in TV commercials; consequently, it is difficult for children to resist the temptation and they tend to require parents to purchase those products. However, the fact is that the result is often contrary to their expectations. 

In order to relieve children from high pressure, several effective measures are supposed to be adopted. First and foremost, children themselves had better to adjust their attitude towards exams or competition in schools. To be specific, composure and optimism are essential elements they should be equipped with when encountering challenges. In addition, parents’ encouragement and guidance rather than undue requirements serve the better purpose. Furthermore, government should play a regulatory role in advertising aimed at children, applying the power to censoring the content of commercials. 

In conclusion, although it is regarded as a normal phenomenon in the wake of social development, children who are continuously under pressure are likely to suffer from mental diseases. Therefore, children, parents as well as the authority should make concerted efforts to address this issue.

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